if i stay,



..would you please stop the time
so i'm sailing
to catch you.

..can you please hear me through the darkness,
so my whisper could fly to the moon 

and save us.

will you be home
than kiss me,

-Jakarta, with the storm.

Comments

Rackmount LCD said…
It is your very nice sharing. Thanks for it.
Pirsing said…
Wonderful Poetry!!!
Leone said…
There is an echoing in the sounds of the words used here. An echoing that touches the silver threads of a Mississippi night.
henrietta said…
Sharing in honor waiting.
The moon over there, but so interesting. Nice.
rose said…
In time, you'll get it.
It is reality of heart's nuance.
God inside is touching you.
Good Luck.
Tang said…
Wow. so flattered! thank you Leone
Tang said…
thank you for the appreciation
Tang said…
Good luck to you too :)

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